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I. **introduction** **A.** nfl football injuries compared to the mls

B. Thesis Statement (Argument) football has more serious injuries to the knee then soccer

II. First Body Paragraph (1st supporting reason)

A. Topic Sentence football has more injuries then the soccer B. Expand and give specific details football has more contact then soccer in physical roughness. C. Evidence → Quote from text or example Almost 194,000 children ages five to 14 were treated in hospital emergency rooms for football-related injuries D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument)

III. Second Body Paragraph (2nd supporting reason) A. Topic Sentence soccer has less injuries then football even in youth. B. Expand and give specific details

C. Evidence → Quote from text or example About 75,000 children ages five to 14 were treated in hospital emergency rooms for soccer-related injuries

D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument)

IV. Third Body Paragraph (3rd supporting reason) A. Topic Sentence football is more dangerous B. Expand and give specific details in football you are constantly making contact with one an other.

C. Evidence → Quote from text or example

D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument)

V. Conclusion A. Restate thesis football has more serious injuries to the knee then soccer B. Summarize supporting reasons 194,000 children ages five to 14 were treated in hospital emergency rooms for football-related injuries. but only a bout 75,000 children ages five to 14 were treated in hospital emergency rooms for soccer-related injuries C. Concluding thoughts football has manny more injuries then soccer no matter were the injury is.