N.Kacimi

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I. **Introduction** America Next Top Models has brought attention to plus size models.
 * A. Introduce the general topic **

With the creation of the of the t.v show " Next Top Model" plus size models became very popular in America culture.
 * B. Thesis Statement (Argument) **

The t.v show depicts the process how a person can become a model. A person doesn't have to be perfect. ( face, body )
 * II. First Body Paragraph (1st supporting reason) **

How the plus size models became famous. There's many people that are obese adults. Many manufacturers, they want to make clothes for overweight people too. A) to make them feel better. B)the seller's want to make money too. C) the reason why plus size models became popluar because the overweight people are buying clothes.
 * A. Topic Sentence **

The "America Next Top model" started 2003, By 2010 trya banks picked " Whitany Thompason" she's a plus size model.
 * B. Expand and give specific details **

Whitney thompson proved that plus size can be models. Plus size models should be the top, Modeling isn't for skinny bodys.
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 * D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument) **

Whitney thompson became America Next Top Model. "She was the winner of America's Next Top Model cycle 10 ". A) She knows how to photograph well . B) She was beautiful C) She was in a decent shape D)She had a postive attitude E) "She had easy brezzy" look "covergirl".
 * III. Second Body Paragraph (2nd supporting reason) **

How Whitney thompson didn't care if she was overweight or not. She made people realize you don't have to be skinny to become a model.
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A) Some people though, models has to look perfect and skinny , but modeling is about how models can look good when they take photo's. B) Everyone thinks models are suppose to be skinny but it's not , "There's " 61.1 perecent More Americans are becoming overweight or obese" ([])" So skinny reagual people are looking up for them , & Overweight and obese have to look up for someone thats their size , & think to become heathly , rather then being a toothpick.
 * B. Expand and give specific details **

Being a model is a big job, Regluar people look up for models. So the regular people can look at them and say " i wanna be like her or him " Therefore the regular people can be heathy and active. D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument)
 * C. Evidence → Quote from text or example **

Modeling isn't just about being beautiful Regualr people thinks Models have to have a perfect (Smile, beautiful and Skinny ) Regualr people are wrong. It's not all about being pretty. It's all about how to take pictures, & poste B. Expand and give specific details For example : Whitney thompson was a regualr girl, and wanted to become a model. She wanted to prove everyone, that modeling isn't all bout being skinny , it's all about being having a heathy life sytle.
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 * A. Topic Sentence **
 * C. Evidence → Quote from text or example **
 * D. Analysis (analyze/connect evidence to supporting reason and argument) **


 * V. Conclusion **
 * A. Restate thesis **


 * B. Summarize supporting reasons **


 * C. Concluding thoughts **
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Nermine Kacimi Ms. Malatesta English 10 23 March 2011 Title “America's Next Top Model” has brought national attention to plus size modeling. The television show depicts the process of how any regular person can become a model. A person doesn't have to be perfect. Modeling isn't all about being beautiful. With the creation of the T.V show, "America's Next Top Model," plus size models became popular in America culture .The television show started in 2003. By 2010, Tyra Banks picked Whitney Thompson, a plus size model, as the season ten winner. Plus size models are important to the American Fashion Industry because there are many plus size people that want to be fashionable. ( where did you get this info. Write it here) Plus size models on “America’s Next Top Model” shows that the person doesn't have to be perfect to become a “Next Top Model". Modeling is about how you can prove yourself. There are many adults in America that are obese. Many manufacturers are making clothes for overweight people because they can make a lot of money. The manufacturers also want overweight adults to have higher self-esteem by wearing fashionable clothes. Modeling is all about proving yourself to inspire teens, adults, and overweight. The sellers want to make money, so the manufacturers can have money and make more clothes for the United States of America. “The United States of America has %61.1 more people becoming overweight or obese" ( Hendrick ). So therefore, the reason why plus size models became popular is because the overweight and obese people are buying more stylish and clothes in general. “America’s Next Top Model” started in 2003. By 2010, Trya Banks picked Whitney Thompson, who is a plus size model. She thought to herself that she hasn’t seen plus size models in “America’s Next Top Model.” ( where did you get this info. Write it here) Whitney Thompson became “America’s Next Top Model”. She was the winner of “America's Next Top Model” cycle 10. Whitney Thompson wasn’t perfect. The judge’s were looking for how to take pictures. “America’s Next Top Model” made things different. Whitney Thompson was a regular girl. She lived in a small town where she realized she never saw a plus size model in “America’s next top model “. Whitney Thompson was confident; she thought she could win cycle 10. Whitney Thompson signed up and was interviewed and the judges liked her. Whitney Thompson showed everyone how modeling isn't about looking sexy. She showed the United States that nobody is perfect. She tells us that modeling is about knowing how to photograph well and show strong faces. Tyra Banks really liked how Whitney Thompson was strong and brave. Also, Whitney Thompson has a positive attitude. Whitney Thompson has an “easy breezy" look for "cover girl". Whitney Thompson works for Cover Girl. Whitney did a commercial for Cover Girl. Whitney put on make up to sell cover girl products. She helped Cover Girl sell products. " America Next Top Model " Made her do Cover Girl, Whitney really likes what she's doing . She's been enjoying what she have done. She made a decent job . She loves her creal.  Whitney Thompson didn't care if she was overweight or not. She made people realize you don't have to be skinny to become a model. Some people think models have to look perfect and skinny. It's not true. Modeling is about how models can look good when they take photos. It's important to take good pictures so they can be in magazines. "There's 61.1 percent more Americans are becoming overweight".  ( Hendrick). Overweight and obese people need to look up to someone that’s their size and need to think healthy rather then being a toothpick like some models. Whitney Thompson had changed her lifestyle, so regular people followed her lead. Plus size models became very popular in American culture. In the United States everyone likes to wear different styles. This is why the show “America’s Next Top Model” started. Trya Banks thought it would be pretty nice to have a show about modeling, and how America doesn’t have to look perfect to become a model. Whitney showed provements. Now the America's are looking up for Whitney Thompson. Whitney Thompson gives a pefrect example. Whitney is loyal and she loves what she does. Modeling is beauty. She went on to become the first plus-size winner of //" America Next Top Model" .She's Proud of it. Whitney Thompson knows how to take picture's. She's postive, everyone trys to give her negative talks so therefore she trys not to listen to bad comments. Whitney Thompson showed America's how people shouldn't be ashame.//